I like the glitch sounds. I can hear you are using the default FL Studio drum samples, which is something you should NEVER do - they sound horrible and distasteful. Try making your own drum samples. Other than that, there's not much to it.
It has a drum beat but there's way too much distortion and so the drum beat overpowers all the other instruments. Also, you should mix your audio at at least a 30% lower volume.
Over all, i like the chaos and this could turn into a good song with some more work.
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